What the hell?
Sundown is right, I agree with part with what LordSixx says. Western artists drawing anime/manga always seems to miss something (even my work is like that). But hell, I do want to be an anime/manga artist, I wouldn't even consider drawing in any other style. And I'm gonna keep drawing in manga style until I master it and make it look genuine.
You're more than welcome to give constructive criticisms on the artwork here, but if you come in just to insult people you can f*ck off.
If you like starting flame wars so much, go make a macross 7 thread or something.